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Share Your GloPoWriMo ‘25 Poems
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Herb Hagell
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Apr 17, 2025
Yeah. The saggy bits.
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Share Your GloPoWriMo ‘25 Poems
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Herb Hagell
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Apr 17, 2025
Day 15 "Mirror Glance" Look at yourself in the mirror and write a poem in second person ("you"). Be as tender or fierce as the moment requires. I couldn't decide between good image or bad image. So... I tried both. "Mirror, Split" [RIGHT] You lurching in again! With your same sorry ass and sagging, bloodshot eyes. Your ashen grief beneath the lids of a failed flame. You break my heart. Hear the faucet croak? Splashing water like a baptism too late won't away the doubt. [LEFT] There you are—the bright seeker, clothed in ink like an alchemist's beaker. But you're still standing, and I reflect a man not lost, but circumspect. Your brow is bare, your face renewed— I feel your fire, though ere subdued. You once chased stars through glass— this down-cast spell can't last. [RIGHT] What? Glaring at me, like I’m the liar. Like I conjured this shaven fraud beside me. His beard drips. You smell of sweat and disbelief. You seek the mastery of words, but your poems are not here. [LEFT] Your every pause contains a breath, and not all quiet portends death The voice that used to sing, but silence precedes the spring. Recall the forge of your dreams— from those embers, your words stream. [RIGHT] Don’t talk to me in prophetic rhyme. You burned the maps— your fire is lost, you type in circles, each line a noose like a failing slip-knot. [LEFT] And still you write. Despite the aching. That is no fall— that is the remaking. Your Sight still stirs, though dimly shown, the path you share where others shone. [RIGHT] I think you tire of choosing and losing. But... [LEFT] You have not failed, dear scribe whose soul wandered from your table's goal. Even at your lowest, you are not alone when both halves stare back as one.
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Share Your GloPoWriMo ‘25 Poems
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Herb Hagell
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Apr 16, 2025
Day 03: "Found Words" Pick up a newspaper, leaflet, receipt, or any piece of text around you. Choose 7 random words and use them all in a poem. It's just that kind of day when 7 little words turn into a protest... maybe just a satire. When I read the Day 03 prompt, I picked up the nearest book—The Malahat Review, Issue 229, bookmarked at 'Behold' by Paula Turcotte. Seven words called for my attention: registry wipers clipboard crackle bumper fingernails flower I hope you enjoy my Speampunk fable. Form 27-B A blossom pinned to the lapel of war— white, wilting, artificial— authorized in triplicate beneath the flickering gaslamp registry squinting through clouds of incredulity. The clerk’s wipers smear condensation from the sky-window; outside, the sun coughs steam into the gears of another morning, he scribbles another cog in the wheel. He flips his clipboard with the crackle of bone-dry parchment, sweat dripping from his brow, checking boxes beside “Floral Justification” and “Cultural Integration via Parade.” Boots tap like metronomes on cobbled iron floors. Fingernails stained with carbon ink sign the clause permitting redecorating the capital in imperial tones. The air smells of burnt letters, a bumper bent by ritual collisions as brass-hulled vehicles from the March of Efficiency line up outside the Ministry of Assimilation. No bullet. No bomb. Just form 27-B— filed, stamped, and notarized by men who whistle through copper lips as the borders redraw themselves in script too ornate to bleed. The March of Efficiency clatters by— clockwork limbs in perfect polished protocol and the brass grin of triumph, parading down the Avenue of Staples. The clerk's child waves a flag of rationed sleep. Past banners stitched with metric pride, as citizens cheer in uniform cadence, watched from smokey balustrades by the Agency of Imperial Gaslight, illuminating all—except intent and truth.
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Share Your GloPoWriMo ‘25 Poems
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Herb Hagell
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Apr 16, 2025
Well done C.L.A.S!
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Share Your GloPoWriMo ‘25 Poems
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Share Your GloPoWriMo ‘25 Poems
In [Archived] GloPoWriMo 2025
Share Your GloPoWriMo ‘25 Poems
In [Archived] GloPoWriMo 2025
Herb Hagell
Member of the Cove
Member of the Cove
Apr 15, 2025
Day 13: 'A Letter Unsent' This is part 1 of Day 13. I'd like to think I can get to part 2, which was the original focus of the day—when her husband finds her letter, after her death. Stay My darling love— I write this with shaking hands, though the house breathes silence and your coat hangs by the door. Your eyes smiled when you saw me this morning, your gentle and unthinking kiss, still tingles on my temple— like an unquenchable question. Last night, he sang again— your friend from another era, whose name I dare not say. His voice spilled from a playlist— as if it had never left the room where we first danced in shadow, too drunk on futures to see the fault-lines underfoot. I almost wrote I love him, just now. But what I meant was—I remember. I remember the knife of yearning that made even shadows feel full. I remember, no— reflecting if I had chosen too soon— or not soon enough. I remember, he made me feel alive. You made me feel love. There is a difference. I learned, and continue to learn that love doesn’t always begin with fire— for us, it started with a quiet hand resting near the coffee cup, after a near-fatal quake— your steady voice in my shaking dark. Even now, this ache— a rush of chemicals I feel when I hear him. I thought I could fold it away, but it stirs in me on long walks, in music, in the way you laugh, or not. I sometimes see him in you, like you captured the best of him. I had thought about leaving, in the early days. I even packed a bag once— I left in the attic, hidden under the other remnants of long-ago lives. But I didn’t walk out the door. Not because of uncertainty. I sat on my side of the bed and looked at you sleeping, for hours. and a voice said: 'stay'. Only that. 'Stay'. I remember his brash to your quieting presence. I remember possession and your open door. You let me fly yet... with you, I feel complete. I am writing this not to open wounds, but to free this ghost so I don’t carry it forever. You will never read this. But I needed to write it, fold it into the creases of the moments between us— that you always trusted to be enough. Always, —
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Share Your GloPoWriMo ‘25 Poems
In [Archived] GloPoWriMo 2025
Share Your GloPoWriMo ‘25 Poems
In [Archived] GloPoWriMo 2025
Herb Hagell
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Apr 14, 2025
Wow, Carah! Beautiful.
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Share Your GloPoWriMo ‘25 Poems
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Herb Hagell
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Apr 13, 2025
thanks Gallagher
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Share Your GloPoWriMo ‘25 Poems
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Herb Hagell
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Apr 01, 2025
Well done CLAS! Embrace
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