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Nathalie Tasler
Member of the Cove
Oct 01, 2024
Day 30
I struggled like Genevieve so I decided on satire ...
Some sort of mangled elegy
The end is nigh! So hear my plight—oh friend!
Joy we shared, and pain, and grammar's bite.
Alas, all good things must come to an end.
But I write my p-cove chapbook tonight!
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Nathalie Tasler
Member of the Cove
Sep 29, 2024
Ahhhh now I understand the refrain explanation and I entirely missed the rhyme within bit! Thank you so much Okay trying again ...
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Nathalie Tasler
Member of the Cove
Sep 29, 2024
Day 27 blank verse
Power
I plant my self in soil so deep with love
In darkness I shall grow beyond your ken
And ripen into me alone once more
Until I blaze into the dawn of day
Expand beyond all hope and trepidation
Oh fear not growth nor healing pains to come
For once the sun hits gentle leaves with light
I will spread wings of powerful creation
And take flight
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Nathalie Tasler
Member of the Cove
Sep 29, 2024
Ghazal
This has been difficult what do you think? How can I make this work?
Loss
Hollow tree hit by a lightning bolt
Grief strangles me in his hold
You fell like a leaf in autumn
You would you have been told
And yet you could not change
Striding forward oh so bold
Now we sit in sorrow alone
Loss is always dark and cold
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Nathalie Tasler
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Sep 24, 2024
I love the image of red and orange leaves being fire that burns the branches clean 😍
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Nathalie Tasler
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Sep 21, 2024
I don't think it is cheesy, the imagery you use is actually very nice, without being corny. You are doing well for finding this challenging!!
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Nathalie Tasler
Member of the Cove
Sep 21, 2024
This is powerful I think in the last stanza the "downtrodden" can easily be left out and maybe that's what makes you stumble?
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Nathalie Tasler
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Sep 21, 2024
I do like this one and the haiku speaks to me so much
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